Thursday, October 15, 2009

"Roof Top Voyeur" by Pat Koscienski

"Roof Top Voyeur"
12" x 9"
Acrylic

"Roof Top Voyeur" is the painting I sent to Karin Jurick for the DSFDF Roof Tops challenge . I thought by putting in the pigeon, I would have less building tops to worry about. LOL I feel that I need to put in the window sill to the right, however, I'm now out of space. I thought the pigeon's neck would be enough to direct the eye back into the painting, but I still feel like I'm going to fall out of the canvas. Maybe some sheer curtains? Or, maybe a diptych? If interested in seeing more of my paintings, abstract and representational, visit my web site at http://www.patkoscienski.com/ If you want to contact me, my e-mail address is patsfineart@hotmail.com

PENNSYLVANIA DAILY PAINTER PAT KOSCIENSKI
www.dailypaintersabstract.blogspot.com
www.patkoscienski.com

16 comments:

  1. This clearly speaks 'city', Pat! I have never seen rooftoops without pigeons somewhere - and this little guy peeking in the window is hilarious! LOVE IT!!!

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  2. I love you pigeon, Pat! (honestly I love animals more then building in general! :-)))
    Good composition.

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  3. Thanks Claire and Tatiana, for your nice comments. I can see why these are called challenges.

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  4. Hi Pat, good take on the challenge. He's looking for snacks.

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  5. Thanks, Mark. I should have put those cupcakes crumbs on the inside sill.

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  6. I thought this was wonderful as soon as I saw it over on the DS blog, Pat. What a great "bird's eye view!" That pigeon is phenomenal and a stroke of genius for this challenge. Please leave as is!! I think it is just perfect!!

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  7. Awesome idea to add the pigeon- love the painting.

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  8. Thanks Priti. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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  9. Pat, I love it! As you showed us with the cupcake, your creativity is over the top! Congrats on a unique challenge entry! I agree with AutumnLeaves - don't change a thing!

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  10. Thank you Autumn and Rosemary, I'll take your suggestions and leave it as is. I had it over at the gallery at last night's reception and was told the same. They liked the idea of putting a cupcake wrapper and some cake crumbs on the inside sill. LOL

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  11. Perfect addition to the challenge, it says "city life" in any city you can name!

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  12. You're right Ann, he sure does typify "city life". An interesting subject to paint.

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  13. Thanks, dominique, I'm glad you liked it.

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